animating was actually pretty good, but the storyline was boring and the humour over used
animating was actually pretty good, but the storyline was boring and the humour over used
ok thanks anyway
the quality was awful. the ideas unoriginal. this is not sprite genious, nor is it even well animated.
make it better asshole!
lol well it was well colored and put together, but i feel like the character design was a little to basic, with not enough "snazz", but her movments were very exagerated and well animated. the voice work was beautiful but I found it ended a little to abruptly. pherhaps you could have a scene with her crashing from the drugs???
pretty good though, 7/10, 4/5~
Thank you for the fair review. :3 I don't plan on changing anything in this cartoon, but I'll take your feedback into consideration if I do something like this again. <3
well your presentation was ok i guess, but the voices sucked. seriously find some voice actors. what i gathered to be a mushroom looked like a dick, so you shouldnt keep your characters so simple lol. the coloring was fine, and i liked the creative expressions and backgrounds with the moving graphics to set the scenes mood. some of the humour was dry - like "i bet i robot could do it" overall this wasnt very entertaining, but the animation was half decent so ill give u 2 stars for that aspect
Hmm, my mushroom more looks like a mushroom to me, but it's your opinion.
wasnt to bad, was smooth atleast, and i really like the blood splatter sound effect. where could i find it???
good ideas and voice acting and content was apriopriate. animation was better and i like your character designs, but if they were cleaner and bolder and the actions were more smoothly animated and the mouths had teeth and tounge this would have been more visually pleasing and if the characters actions were more exagerated
the grass was good but the animation was choppy and rough for a loop. if you fixed this up added music and colored and vectorized this it could be a nice portfolio piece
wasnt to bad, good raw attempt at fbf i mean your point was executed atleast. keep working hard and remember the cleaner the better no matter what your drawing. art and animation could definitly be improved tho. good job on the storyboarding tho and setting the right mood
Yeah took me time to realize I have to draw a drawing a frame and not every 2 frames. I promise my frame-by-frame to be better next time. And to my art, my tablet sucks.
lol funny audio and good drawing but the vcam showing took away more than it added i think =/
wow i really loved the backgrounds! very visually pleasing ^^ well made short
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