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Did the gnome steal her wallet ? haha, well the animation was simple and fairly well done. I think it could have been more exagerated, it worked but was basic solid posing. Could used some more squash and squish, but the poses read well anyways. Good shading, made the piece visually apeasing, and the textured images ie. the wallet were nice. A lil laggy but it dont matter. not that entertaining tho no offense. Good work regardless I guess!

Kreid responds:

Thanks man, wish I had longer to expand on some of it, I agree fully about the squash and stretch and what not, as for the lag, the contest said that videos should be uploaded to youtube, so the swf version really wasn't my top priority at the time. Thanks for the positives and constructive feedback!

More entertaining than the last episode, better storyboarding, structure, and plot. What I would have liked to seen is a peak inside the paramid, I think that could have been a cool scene. Keep it up dude.

krazy lol. short and stupid

well, i saw good potential in this one, and i really liked the audio. The looping scene dragged on to long, and i almost exited the browser, and then the film ended to early.... shoulda have kept going dude before slapping to be continued on. I mean c'mon, give it all you got, espically for a first episode of a series

lol it was a bit funny, but your overal animation needs improvement in all areas. keep at it, you have funny ideas!

heh funny little short, was this done with a mouse? jw ;) dont matter was funny and i chuckled and didnt expect the turn of events :o good art for what this is. if you were to do something else id rather recommend watching your lines are in proportion but for this piece its floppyness suits the feel to it well

wow tbh i was a lil skeptical at first from it's icon image but was plesently surprised. the coloring, linework, storyboarding, expressions, and content were all great. seriously great job, this short is great!

heh, good lil short. line work was smooth and the animation was fun. the ending was unexpected, good lil short about the redesign

haha well the animation wasnt to bad. I take it this was done with a mouse =3
has that mousey feel to it, anyways moving past., the joke was well executed and the character movements worked well enough. background location could have been better, and i think the storyboarding could have been a little stronger, but for a quick shit this aint bad

Pico Sure does rule the day in this one! I came to this page originaly to observe how you animated fast motions instead of using inbetweens when realized I never reveiwed this classic! The character designs over the top cartoonyness works well, espically with the fast thought out pasing. The music flows great with the scene's moods, and the expressions are readable and great. Lip syncs there, and backgrounds were simple and well done. The art styles were always fitting, and the jokes were great. Nice newground refrences throughout. I think what really pulls this together as a piece though is the line quality. The brush work is so soild it's hard to tell what wasn't done in pencil and what wasn't done in brush.You must have turned off the pressure settings on your tablet to achieve this I imagine for the character outlines that were brush? Anyways, response or no response - this flash rules and is an all time favorite. I remember loving every minute of it on picoday =)

boybogart responds:

Hey man, thanks! I didn't actually use any brush for the lines in this, I just used the line tool and coverted it into fills for the parts where thick to thin lines are needed.

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