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[When Fanboys Collide One!]

*Sigh*

If you INSIST on tweened animation, let me PLEASE give you some helpful pointers.

1. I reccommend using LINE / PENCIL tool when creating mostly tweened animation because it looks cleaner and it's more acceptable in this genre of animation. Just PLEASE, don't switch from brush to line, aka your Mouths and some other things.

2. Also, please include more than just 1 head angle for your main characters to make things a little more interesting. I know the guy at the end had 2, but that doesn't count because he wasn't even in the movie.

3. Also, please have more than one hand movements, watch college university for example, or Neptune circles work. I think that's how tweened animations should look, so if your going to be lazy you might as well go the extra mile.

4. Last this is an ACTUAL flaw in your cartoon. You don't know where the elbow is. First of all the TOP part of your arm is bigger than the bottom part excluding the hand. And your elbow is NOT where your sleeves is. If you put it directly in the middle, I'd find that except able to. I know the guy in the black shirt had it a little higher then the middle. But the guy with the T-shirt ... no.

5. Just make sure everything is as clean as possibly because this make the overall production look professional and attractive. You may wanna do a lil' shading to but don't go crazy because then it just looks noobish.

Those are the 5 biggest flaws in your cartoon and animation techniques that I could see. Overall it was an average cartoon, nothing special in my opinion. The content was also very predictable I found as well. It was semi entertaining to watch though.

david

DAGamesOfficial responds:

glad ya kind of liked it. Umm, there was really no need for another head angle for this kind of cartoon, second, I know were the elbow is, it's just my style, I choose to have it there. the reason why I keep it like that is because whenever I make the arm lower down and add an elboe, the objects fall out of place thus making it look crappier.

[Redesign Overdrive]

CORRECTION

Tom was born in April, and married in May

Rudy responds:

Yeah, his wife is April, He was married in May. I know that. Fucked up in the movie though.

[Stop Sprite Genocide]

...

whut?
Darius son, that made no sense. I loved the part where link died though (L)
FUCK SPRITE MOVIES.

DariusR responds:

I just got a major hard-on......from this porn ad thingy.

I want to go suck sticks...drumsticks. Sorry, a little typo.

[A Kitty Krew Beatdown]

Shame on the n***a !

The animation, art, and music were terrific Noggy! I must download that song, you're style is also amazing. I hate the KK though, I find it extremly werid you support them. I hated the venom run cycle though ]: .

[Clyde & Erwin]

Awesome!

Great animation, just I hated to see your website spammed everywhere ]:

[Gecko & Sticky]

Sextasmic

Simply stunning, I wish I had your great animating power! Excellent work!

[BBQ-Town 2500]

abosulutly loved it

nothing more i can say, it was stunning for the genre of animation it was, the new standard! The blood was also very nice.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you very much.

[EPICDOTSWF]

Why did you resubmit ... ?

Anyways, horrible art and animation - but there was just something about it that I loved. As far as capturing atmosphere you did an incredible job with that.

thenewBEATNIKS responds:

I couldnt figure out how to edit it

[PALADIN episode 5 part 1]

Haha!

Nicely done bro, your greatest creation to date as far as I'm concerned. You showed good understanding of human anatomy but, your fbf was a little choppy, and you didn't restrain from the occasionally tween. I would have just ditched the shading and different layers and fbf-ed the whole thing, but I could tell using the models you set-up it was a challenge. Your lip syncing wasn't bad, but the brush size didn't match the rest of the brush size on your characters. It overall was a pretty good movie, and I enjoyed it.

Good work

[Phoenix Wrong: Green Wing]

oh yeah

British humor, and stolen gifs is exactly what animators wanna see. Please stop people, this is doing you no good. I thought the phenoix wrong stage was finally through, the only good point to this lame movie was at least you presented the stolen artwork nicely and the introduction showed at least you can use flash, but you can't yet animate as in "animate."

EON responds:

I'll try harder with my next version of Chaos Faction then..