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It's Ok. Not my favorite. I think you could still approve upon the animation. Also adding more lip mouths and transitions mouths will improve your lip sync as well. Keep at it!

SingingmuteStuff responds:

I made it about two years ago, hopefully i've improved a bit since then :)

Thanks for the review.

your stick animation was actually pretty good. your backgorunds lacked and overall visually it could have been puished more. But yea the stick anims were good, so you definitly have potential. Maybe some going back and polishing the weaker designe elments and color tweaking could bring more life and potetial to the project at hand, but sometimes start over from a blank slate isn't a bad idea. You can always use your stick animations again in other stick fight sequences. You seem to be doing well at your frame by frame here but just animating sticks isnt going to round your animation skills. I did a very small stick flick for my first flash and then felt i had aquired all i needed from sticks and moved up and onward. Im giving this a 5, for some ambitious talent and some promising potential. I hope this review clarifies any doubt or reassures any hope you may have had :)

zorzaanimator responds:

ow come on!! XD

some of the line work was a bit rough, but it was pretty good, and the ending genious. your cartoons had feeling and strong symbolism and i knew what the message was at all times. great work

Comick responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! More should be on the way...

COOL

Dam, first you rape flash, now your raping toon boom.... well played sir

ONLY thing, is there could have been more of a punchline at the end, but I couldnt take any points off from this epic work.

AWESOME

chluaid responds:

thank you, Your Highness!

excellent! great work =D

funny and exagerated. not enough cartooning like this round here

The jokes weren't bad, and neither was the script. The character's emotions were felt, and the timing was good. There was definite improvment here. for the most part the character designs were nice, and the shading gave them a nice touch. Lil proportional things with the arms could give them more life though, as right now they look pretty blocky. Your mouth shapes were pretty good but the really square ones I wasn't fond of. your sense of motion was good and pretty right on, so props on that stuff. Some of your hands I did like but some of them could use work. Overall good improvment, but keep pushing yourself. Btw that's really shitty about your iMac =(

Keep at it dude!

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