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great smooth work =D

Really Good man, your backgrounds were the best i've seen yet. I had to watch this atleast 5 times before I knew what was all going on. The small gags like the girl with big tits walking by, and the branch falling on the other dude at the end is all classic. The message strong, and the visuals great. Your effects in the begning and when the days are passing are super cool. Only complaint is you should make the flash size one or two pixels less heigh wise because i could see a bit of the swf at the bottom of the black border. Keep up this epic work! =D

Blordow responds:

I'm not sure if that's on your end or not with the pixel/border thing, because I can't see it, hmm. A lot of my toons are hard to pick up on everything, I think it's good in a way cause it encourages the viewer to watch again, not always the case though, some people wont bother and miss out on a few details. Thanks for the review dude!

heh not bad only thing i could say is smoother lines and colored lines may have had a more desirable effect of the viewer, but good stuff smooth motion and funny gag XD

A bit overly stupid, nd I think the the character designs could have been more intresting, a lil to "blocky" but that is kinda the style of the flash i suppose. But yea it was fun to watch, and visually pleasing!

Meh animation was kinda sloppy, audio was noisy, and it was one panel wtih dialoge.. boring ZZZ

YULFO83 responds:

I'll try my best to emulate your work. note to self make Cartoons more 1 dimensional, soulless and stiff.

Lol...Whut xP

Ugh Your lack of effort hurts my brain O_o

Not bad, characters seem a bit to stiff though. next time work on adding eyebrow expressions to the blinks, and maybe more head/torso rotation. :)

KidneyJohn responds:

Thanks for te tip.

Not bad it flowed well enough, although I would have liked to have seen a flash with original characters. I did like the fact you redrew the designs rather than carbon copying them like most MLP movies :)

TheMAM responds:

Original character animations are on the way. I just wanted to submit a tribute to my favorite show... well second compared to Raising Hope. :P
Thanks, man. Your advice really got me through. :)

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