Well overall this was awesome.
Great animation throughout, with some very strong posing and timing.
I think you did your best work in the begining. I liked the goose scene alot, and how you depicted the cops. voices were fitting, and the artwork strong, you had some nice shading in certain scenes as well.
Your visual gags were always funny, and some favorites include:
Gooche face, & the guy breaking into a yolk
Your writting was cartoony, but I think the bulk of this could be dimmed down some in the next episode. I think it was to long to be as strong as it should, try keeping the next one in between the two-three minute range with the strongest scenes/jokes prominent.
Just my thoughts, good work regardless, much better than most things winning daily 1st