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Great video

Cool great video - I only with the explosions at the end were 100% fluent but very nice movie regardless :) great job- definition of a daily feature your hard work really showed through the pasing, and the poses and the coloring was terrific. A+

lol flashy

clearly not a master piece but hey i thought it wasnt 2 bad. fast and furious!

good

altho i felt some parts on the dialoge could have been better expressed, and one stance stuck out 2 me as really off balance. other than that it was great, could have been a lil smoother - take ur time a bit more next time 2 achieve perfection yo

heh

not bad some parts need work, and could have been cleaner- but overall good first attempt- oh and PLEASe invest in a better mic....

dannywaving responds:

yeah I know, i am gonna record the voices with cubase from now on and with a better mic. thanks for the constructive review!

Good

very solid - only comment I really have is some of the shading didn't look that nice, I feel someparts (ex. the shaing on the distant trees) really could have looked nicer with a blur effect applied. You should trying bluring the shading in certain areas, it really will make some parts look nicer... but besides from that I was really entertained. 4/5, and 8/10

Real classy man

good work was entertained... but I felt the smoke abruptly stoping at the end was off along with the final pose at the end. I felt like there could have been more of a pull at the end of that last big action - a reaction, the straw of the baloon bouncing a bit perhaps and the ballon head bobbin a bit , as long with the smoke continuing rotating around and then getting sucked back. I feel that this would bost the animation of this a lot. Just a thought but, you had some real nice keys espically the baloon flying around in the air. that shit was dope along with the gradient effects ^^ Nice timing regardless and effort

TheBoogley responds:

you're right the end needed a bit more work, but I only had so much time to dedicate to it... thanks, it's good to have someone pull me up and tell me what's what :)

nice mate

cool character expressions and really good voice acting. try to making things a lil cleanerand smoother nxt time tho
6/10
3/5

cartoonbacon responds:

yeah this was ACTUALLY really old just found it in a old file

Sick man!

This was great, I loved the graphics, story, and pasing - No work needed on this one heh ^^

danomano65 responds:

I really appreciate it!

dude

1s>2s anyday

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