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your stick animation was actually pretty good. your backgorunds lacked and overall visually it could have been puished more. But yea the stick anims were good, so you definitly have potential. Maybe some going back and polishing the weaker designe elments and color tweaking could bring more life and potetial to the project at hand, but sometimes start over from a blank slate isn't a bad idea. You can always use your stick animations again in other stick fight sequences. You seem to be doing well at your frame by frame here but just animating sticks isnt going to round your animation skills. I did a very small stick flick for my first flash and then felt i had aquired all i needed from sticks and moved up and onward. Im giving this a 5, for some ambitious talent and some promising potential. I hope this review clarifies any doubt or reassures any hope you may have had :)

zorzaanimator responds:

ow come on!! XD

some of the line work was a bit rough, but it was pretty good, and the ending genious. your cartoons had feeling and strong symbolism and i knew what the message was at all times. great work

Comick responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! More should be on the way...

Dam, first you rape flash, now your raping toon boom.... well played sir

ONLY thing, is there could have been more of a punchline at the end, but I couldnt take any points off from this epic work.

AWESOME

chluaid responds:

thank you, Your Highness!

Gross... I like it : P.. the backward loop is a mind fuck xD

BTW nice smooth animation

GregoryShitcock responds:

thanks i worked relatively hard on this

Kinda cool. I definitly can see some improvement here!
The design work was actually pretty good.
Keep at it!

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thank you very Much its been a great Adventure to animate and draw of my Favorite Cartoons of all times

good job, keep at it! I see potential :D

Juangatillo responds:

thanks!!!

Good job, this was actually really well animated. From your posing, to your staging, from your lip sync, to your designs... This really came to life here, and was pretty much seemless. Keep it up! Nice and clean too smooth line work too!

boybogart responds:

Thanks man!

Jesus ahah, voted 5 to get ya in the green :D
Was well done lol XD
Violent humour never ceases to make us laugh :P

pcx responds:

thanks for the support

i like the quality of the line work, how is was sketchy, made it interersting. Your facial posing and timing was right on, and lip sync superb. Strong and simple. Funn and interersting. Keep em coming ;D

I think your lighting and overall atmosphere was better than your actually, animation. You had some good animated parts, like the scar crows eye poping off and putting it back, but some of it was a little too stiff, the posing and the movements ( ex, the lip sync ) and really the whole overall design work. it was visually pleasing but id like to see you get a little more loose with your line work next time around, can really emphasis expressions and posing. Overall good work here though, and it flowed real nice in some parts, so good work, and good luck

Budj responds:

Thanks! I'll remember that :>.

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