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[Madness - Preloaded]

Great!

The story line was werod at best but I loved the animation and the way it was put together! Good work, and happy madness day!

LYRONMARTIS responds:

Happy madness day to you 2 :P

[Madness Antecedent]

I actually loved this

You got style by the thousands! Great original trippy work! It was a very edgy cartoon and extremely enjoyable with it's random story line and fast pased dialoge!

MRat responds:

Thanks a load! Edgy? haha I like that. And I'm really impressed the addition of dialogue, with voices, was well accepted like this. It's also nice to see something succeed even after you deviate from the source material.

[RIFK: The Movie]

Nice!

Me and my friends have been using rifk for a LONG time, but we believe it stands for "Rolling in Fuckin kazikstan" or w/e in borat... the concept was great only because it appealed to me, but the animation was lazy.

StagBeetle responds:

LAZY ANIMATION HEY ASSHOLE WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT

[iPhone]

hahahah

horrible animation great concept !

theblackkangaroo responds:

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[SleepEasy]

i like it rupee

you sure are a swell guy

RupeeClock responds:

What, just a 7?

[The Fart Button]

Yum

Not so crazy about the author, but the flash was quite satisfying . Both content and animation, hehe. I think you touched bases with a lot of viewers on this one!

altffour responds:

"Not so Crazy about the author"? What is that supposed to mean?

[Code:R.E.D. Episode 1]

Intresting

The techniques I found you used, extremely interesting. I like how fast passed your tweens were, and overall it was a crisp clean production. The animation and graphics were simple, and well done basically. The Kill Bill song, is to over played though. }: Looking forward to seeing more animations!

David

HeIlbourne responds:

No response because you spelled "Interesting" wrong.

:)

[When Fanboys Collide One!]

*Sigh*

If you INSIST on tweened animation, let me PLEASE give you some helpful pointers.

1. I reccommend using LINE / PENCIL tool when creating mostly tweened animation because it looks cleaner and it's more acceptable in this genre of animation. Just PLEASE, don't switch from brush to line, aka your Mouths and some other things.

2. Also, please include more than just 1 head angle for your main characters to make things a little more interesting. I know the guy at the end had 2, but that doesn't count because he wasn't even in the movie.

3. Also, please have more than one hand movements, watch college university for example, or Neptune circles work. I think that's how tweened animations should look, so if your going to be lazy you might as well go the extra mile.

4. Last this is an ACTUAL flaw in your cartoon. You don't know where the elbow is. First of all the TOP part of your arm is bigger than the bottom part excluding the hand. And your elbow is NOT where your sleeves is. If you put it directly in the middle, I'd find that except able to. I know the guy in the black shirt had it a little higher then the middle. But the guy with the T-shirt ... no.

5. Just make sure everything is as clean as possibly because this make the overall production look professional and attractive. You may wanna do a lil' shading to but don't go crazy because then it just looks noobish.

Those are the 5 biggest flaws in your cartoon and animation techniques that I could see. Overall it was an average cartoon, nothing special in my opinion. The content was also very predictable I found as well. It was semi entertaining to watch though.

david

DAGamesOfficial responds:

glad ya kind of liked it. Umm, there was really no need for another head angle for this kind of cartoon, second, I know were the elbow is, it's just my style, I choose to have it there. the reason why I keep it like that is because whenever I make the arm lower down and add an elboe, the objects fall out of place thus making it look crappier.

[Redesign Overdrive]

CORRECTION

Tom was born in April, and married in May

Rudy responds:

Yeah, his wife is April, He was married in May. I know that. Fucked up in the movie though.