very strong solid animation. effects were great and your timing is spectacular. very clean well done graphics throughout. So strong and Simple
very strong solid animation. effects were great and your timing is spectacular. very clean well done graphics throughout. So strong and Simple
well the line work was quite clean, and the timing on the animation and poses definitly worked, but this really isn't my cup of tea. good shading and coloring in here, just thought the chracters were to simple for my liking regardless of how well animated they were.
Dam ! You really made a big splash on teh scene frostdrive! Well, overall this showed you have strong ambitions, and you really care about your visuals. The backgrounds and coloring were all lovely through-out, and the script was good to lol. Expressions and poses were good, but could have been better ( more exageration mainly ) but yea everything was pretty much tight (y0y)
I know what you mean with needing more exaggeration. After making this I learned a little bit about body language and such. Next time I think I'll have that fixed. Thanks for the review. :)
haha relevent and witty. Funny gags I bet 75% of u missed :
The dude is deep throating the mic XD
The girl in the audience with huge ones, has tits written on her face.
Was fast passed, but I liked it that way, keep things intresting. Your characters are full of expressions, and the scenes full of great colors. I really liked the drawing of the sun, and how that scene was animated. the art style was great, and so were the voices. Great to see you snagged daily 5th!
I love adding subtle things everywhere, for people to pick up on if they're quick. Not many people notice but good job on picking those things out! Thanks for the review Dave :D
i thought this was quite good. good job hacking threw this one, i liked the ending and thought the idea was clever. animation worked, wasn't the best but was a lot better than most., keep at it!
Thanks man, glad you liked it!
blunt... animation in all areas still needs improvment. I guess the storyboarding wasn't to bad tho or the joke execution. was a little to vulgar for me, even tho half the shit i make is - it's just this was so blunt rather than dimmed down by excessive cartoonyness if you know what i meeaan
lol, okay
good job on the animation. the curvey charcters held real expression, and the dialoge was well executed. good job on the storyboarding, the shadows and shading added a lot to the feeling.
heh dont beat yourself up to much over this one. I thought it was funny, I think the voices were what really did it. the character designs were very strong to. creative and unique ~
Did the gnome steal her wallet ? haha, well the animation was simple and fairly well done. I think it could have been more exagerated, it worked but was basic solid posing. Could used some more squash and squish, but the poses read well anyways. Good shading, made the piece visually apeasing, and the textured images ie. the wallet were nice. A lil laggy but it dont matter. not that entertaining tho no offense. Good work regardless I guess!
Thanks man, wish I had longer to expand on some of it, I agree fully about the squash and stretch and what not, as for the lag, the contest said that videos should be uploaded to youtube, so the swf version really wasn't my top priority at the time. Thanks for the positives and constructive feedback!
More entertaining than the last episode, better storyboarding, structure, and plot. What I would have liked to seen is a peak inside the paramid, I think that could have been a cool scene. Keep it up dude.
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