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That was awesome and simple

You used basica animation and nailed it to the ground, good day kind sir

i like it rupee

you sure are a swell guy

RupeeClock responds:

What, just a 7?

Yum

Not so crazy about the author, but the flash was quite satisfying . Both content and animation, hehe. I think you touched bases with a lot of viewers on this one!

altffour responds:

"Not so Crazy about the author"? What is that supposed to mean?

" lol, thwomps "

Ian that was pretty tight I must admit. Should have seen my name in the thank-you so now i'll take this time to bitch like a school girl
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good movie
i like some parts more than others
okay
bye
ttyl
gtg
rofl
k
lol

;)

My favorite Flash from you

I don't like the end though
):

terrific animation, although HIGHLY GRUEEEEEESOME.
You must be fucked :)

I crave this

I love the randomness / animation / color scheme / shut-up it's awesome

Intresting

The techniques I found you used, extremely interesting. I like how fast passed your tweens were, and overall it was a crisp clean production. The animation and graphics were simple, and well done basically. The Kill Bill song, is to over played though. }: Looking forward to seeing more animations!

David

HeIlbourne responds:

No response because you spelled "Interesting" wrong.

:)

*Sigh*

If you INSIST on tweened animation, let me PLEASE give you some helpful pointers.

1. I reccommend using LINE / PENCIL tool when creating mostly tweened animation because it looks cleaner and it's more acceptable in this genre of animation. Just PLEASE, don't switch from brush to line, aka your Mouths and some other things.

2. Also, please include more than just 1 head angle for your main characters to make things a little more interesting. I know the guy at the end had 2, but that doesn't count because he wasn't even in the movie.

3. Also, please have more than one hand movements, watch college university for example, or Neptune circles work. I think that's how tweened animations should look, so if your going to be lazy you might as well go the extra mile.

4. Last this is an ACTUAL flaw in your cartoon. You don't know where the elbow is. First of all the TOP part of your arm is bigger than the bottom part excluding the hand. And your elbow is NOT where your sleeves is. If you put it directly in the middle, I'd find that except able to. I know the guy in the black shirt had it a little higher then the middle. But the guy with the T-shirt ... no.

5. Just make sure everything is as clean as possibly because this make the overall production look professional and attractive. You may wanna do a lil' shading to but don't go crazy because then it just looks noobish.

Those are the 5 biggest flaws in your cartoon and animation techniques that I could see. Overall it was an average cartoon, nothing special in my opinion. The content was also very predictable I found as well. It was semi entertaining to watch though.

david

DAGamesOfficial responds:

glad ya kind of liked it. Umm, there was really no need for another head angle for this kind of cartoon, second, I know were the elbow is, it's just my style, I choose to have it there. the reason why I keep it like that is because whenever I make the arm lower down and add an elboe, the objects fall out of place thus making it look crappier.

CORRECTION

Tom was born in April, and married in May

Rudy responds:

Yeah, his wife is April, He was married in May. I know that. Fucked up in the movie though.

...

whut?
Darius son, that made no sense. I loved the part where link died though (L)
FUCK SPRITE MOVIES.

DariusR responds:

I just got a major hard-on......from this porn ad thingy.

I want to go suck sticks...drumsticks. Sorry, a little typo.

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