this actually wasnt bad
but the energy still seems focused 2 much in areas, and made some expressions a tad bland but there were some nice bits of animation in there - clean at least. (y)
this actually wasnt bad
but the energy still seems focused 2 much in areas, and made some expressions a tad bland but there were some nice bits of animation in there - clean at least. (y)
very unique
never the less the passion and emotion is here by all means your art job and anim skills pulled this off nicely great submission
hahahhaha
funnily epic
had 2 watch this twice
awesome (Y) shading was great along with camera and expressions! Great job buddy funny 2
I dont know
Yea sure this animation flowed but i just feel it was rushed at parts and a good flash should never feel rushed! Slow down and master expressions but it was entertaining and fast paced so keep packin that punch
wow
this was entertaining and some parts of the anim were actually quite impressive! this is a serious submission and it is blantly obvious you knew quite I bit of cartoon making knowledge espically with the characters. everything was cute and clean and the action was right on. a few places that coulda used a lil more this and tht but overall quite nice so i wont bitch
funny
funny funny altho i think a zoom transtion slide with 100 on tween ease is more effiient for pan out shots bro. and the lack of anatomyshould be checked. keep makin man
sweet
keep at her, try more angles next time >:D
Perhaps. I guess I do need to experiment with some cinematic things, but I'm so bad at it!
Good work
I liked some of the expressions and jokes. Altho I feel the characters could have been designed better and some movements executed stronger. But all points were apperent and timing worked so good job
Heh!
Not 2 shabby made me laugh was all fine but would have been more expresive if you had expirenmented emotion and dialoge with the BRUSH TOOL ;) I find it helps give author's work that extra FEELING to it ~ but was a good funny short and properly executed so hizah ! >:D +4 +8
Actually, this flash was an attempt to try the line tool as my art is usually very messy. My messy art and the fact that the line tool is how Stamper does his artwork in Flash is why I tried using it. :P But your point is valid.
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