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this actually wasnt bad

but the energy still seems focused 2 much in areas, and made some expressions a tad bland but there were some nice bits of animation in there - clean at least. (y)

very unique

never the less the passion and emotion is here by all means your art job and anim skills pulled this off nicely great submission

hahahhaha

funnily epic

had 2 watch this twice

awesome (Y) shading was great along with camera and expressions! Great job buddy funny 2

I dont know

Yea sure this animation flowed but i just feel it was rushed at parts and a good flash should never feel rushed! Slow down and master expressions but it was entertaining and fast paced so keep packin that punch

wow

this was entertaining and some parts of the anim were actually quite impressive! this is a serious submission and it is blantly obvious you knew quite I bit of cartoon making knowledge espically with the characters. everything was cute and clean and the action was right on. a few places that coulda used a lil more this and tht but overall quite nice so i wont bitch

funny

funny funny altho i think a zoom transtion slide with 100 on tween ease is more effiient for pan out shots bro. and the lack of anatomyshould be checked. keep makin man

sweet

keep at her, try more angles next time >:D

Kwing responds:

Perhaps. I guess I do need to experiment with some cinematic things, but I'm so bad at it!

Good work

I liked some of the expressions and jokes. Altho I feel the characters could have been designed better and some movements executed stronger. But all points were apperent and timing worked so good job

Heh!

Not 2 shabby made me laugh was all fine but would have been more expresive if you had expirenmented emotion and dialoge with the BRUSH TOOL ;) I find it helps give author's work that extra FEELING to it ~ but was a good funny short and properly executed so hizah ! >:D +4 +8

crimson-caesar responds:

Actually, this flash was an attempt to try the line tool as my art is usually very messy. My messy art and the fact that the line tool is how Stamper does his artwork in Flash is why I tried using it. :P But your point is valid.

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