it was allright. concept was kinda funny and was executed fair enough. the audio went well with the visuals and the timing wasnt out of whack. some illustrations were better than others, and overall the whole art and animation could use more work.
it was allright. concept was kinda funny and was executed fair enough. the audio went well with the visuals and the timing wasnt out of whack. some illustrations were better than others, and overall the whole art and animation could use more work.
Hehe, I agree. My drawing has never really been that good. Thanks for the review!
lol i found this humourous and the animation was swell., good work, the different language made it inresting and I laughed at the end but I bet most people will vote low because of it =(
4/5 From me tho! =D
You have skillz no doubt mannn
Yes, i'm sure I got a few zeros just because of that.
Thanks for giving the animation a chance.
well, tbh i didnt know what really happened, nor does the flash entertainment value allow me to want to go ahead and replay it. You had some nice shaded backgrounds and character designs, but I was not a huge fan of the animation technique. Not really my cup of tea but, the backgrounds showed promise in the very least and the art was very fitting for it. The dramatic strings set a good mood aswell. I just didnt get that much entertainment value from it is the thing.
Aw well I can see what you mean. I wanted the story to be a little open ended, but I can understand how it can be confusing XD But thanks too, I had the most fun coming up with the backgrounds oddly enough, so I appreciate that
lol this was funny and you made some valid points. well executed man I feel like me and you have similar views on this site possibly
omg we should chat sometime add me on aim sn is bertramgirl13
was very n00bish, line work and character designs and animation all need more work and detail yo
I will try harder next time
good backgrounds, paneling, and character movment. not sure about the plot tho.. i liked the classy music suiting for the piece. good traditional flash
Thank you :3
wasnt bad dude pretty cool work actually, nice use of custom sprites with real sprites! good audio to
awesome thanks !
animating was actually pretty good, but the storyline was boring and the humour over used
ok thanks anyway
the quality was awful. the ideas unoriginal. this is not sprite genious, nor is it even well animated.
make it better asshole!
lol well it was well colored and put together, but i feel like the character design was a little to basic, with not enough "snazz", but her movments were very exagerated and well animated. the voice work was beautiful but I found it ended a little to abruptly. pherhaps you could have a scene with her crashing from the drugs???
pretty good though, 7/10, 4/5~
Thank you for the fair review. :3 I don't plan on changing anything in this cartoon, but I'll take your feedback into consideration if I do something like this again. <3
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