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[Mushroom King]

Needs work

Well, I'll admit it was OK, But I feel you needed stronger, more accurate character designs, along with most of their poses. The timing was OK but a little jumpy and usually unsmooth. Yes this got your story across, but it could have been much better. The lip sync felt stiff aswell. A lot of this felt stiff, but I do see potential here so keep working hard.

neeko responds:

Thanks for the comment. I completely agree with you on your points. I was short on time and actually went with making the characters look generic. Less to keep track of when animating frame by frame. As time flew by I had to make choices on what to add in and what to work on. If I spent too long focused on one section it wouldn't be finished in time.

Last thing, the lip sync actually took longer than drawing fbf. That threw me pretty bad time wise.

[Yoshi Ain't Got No Iphone]

This is good.

Seriously dude I saw some good potential here, your character's movements are solid and the proportions are there which are the most important. Would have been nicer if it were colored but for getting use to the program this is good!

hummerh14 responds:

Thanks for the positive comment.

[Pikachu vs Jigglypuff]

Haha

Not bad at all my friend, well executed and good use of flash gradients, and shading!
4/5 could have been better if characters were brush drawn with frame by frame :)

PostTimeskipSam responds:

I'm not much of a fan of brush drawn, but in the beginning I did use some FBF with the arm movements(i.e. punching). I probably won't have a fully FBF animation, but I'll try to incorporate as much FBF as I can in future animations.

[SNAPSHOT: Vol 1]

Good job

Good fluid animation, shots, characters, and effects. Pretty dynamic and overall well done and entertaining, keep it up!

QuasimodoxArt responds:

Thank you, sir.

[Mario vs Luigi (MMM scene]

pretty good sprite work

heh cool, was nifty seeing the cool customs morph mario from fat 2 skinny =P , Haha but everything was pro looking and smooth so good work man!

Backlash-D responds:

Haha, Well Mario isn't really fat now a-days, at least compared to the SNES days. That title goes to wario. so my sprites tend to show that.

[Waiting for redesign]

haha

nice take, turned out much different than how i did it
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /388483

MihaP responds:

LOL, never saw it before:PP But thanks for review

[Animation: Blades]

sweet

keep at her, try more angles next time >:D

Kwing responds:

Perhaps. I guess I do need to experiment with some cinematic things, but I'm so bad at it!

[Falcon Date!]

Heh!

Not 2 shabby made me laugh was all fine but would have been more expresive if you had expirenmented emotion and dialoge with the BRUSH TOOL ;) I find it helps give author's work that extra FEELING to it ~ but was a good funny short and properly executed so hizah ! >:D +4 +8

crimson-caesar responds:

Actually, this flash was an attempt to try the line tool as my art is usually very messy. My messy art and the fact that the line tool is how Stamper does his artwork in Flash is why I tried using it. :P But your point is valid.

[I love pancakes]

NOno

Yes

Owenn responds:

Thanks man

[The Animating Process]

cmon

cmon work hard

Imacow responds:

Maybe