Wow
A truely timeless anim - I espically like the colored effect on the edges of the paper in the background - perfection here
Wow
A truely timeless anim - I espically like the colored effect on the edges of the paper in the background - perfection here
thanks mate! :D
lol!
get a 7 for the laugh at the end! ^^ great show
lol for the laughs
heh
not bad some parts need work, and could have been cleaner- but overall good first attempt- oh and PLEASe invest in a better mic....
yeah I know, i am gonna record the voices with cubase from now on and with a better mic. thanks for the constructive review!
Real classy man
good work was entertained... but I felt the smoke abruptly stoping at the end was off along with the final pose at the end. I felt like there could have been more of a pull at the end of that last big action - a reaction, the straw of the baloon bouncing a bit perhaps and the ballon head bobbin a bit , as long with the smoke continuing rotating around and then getting sucked back. I feel that this would bost the animation of this a lot. Just a thought but, you had some real nice keys espically the baloon flying around in the air. that shit was dope along with the gradient effects ^^ Nice timing regardless and effort
you're right the end needed a bit more work, but I only had so much time to dedicate to it... thanks, it's good to have someone pull me up and tell me what's what :)
nice mate
cool character expressions and really good voice acting. try to making things a lil cleanerand smoother nxt time tho
6/10
3/5
yeah this was ACTUALLY really old just found it in a old file
Sick man!
This was great, I loved the graphics, story, and pasing - No work needed on this one heh ^^
I really appreciate it!
Made me laugh
good job NG needed this - would have been better if there were a couple more skits tho bro
yeah, but like I said this guy asked me to do it and I was like eh, ok
Dam funny!
could have used somemore inbetweens but hilarous regardless :D
I totally should do more inbetweens and draw on some motion blur. I was going to but I got really sick of this animation. I'll be more patient next time!
cool
i liked the changing styles, but i feel it could have been shorter and would have been more entertaining kuz some parts draged on and you need to work on your animation timing a bit ex. the bird getting shot - birds dont move tht slow, and the first background the perspective was off. but good potential so i give you a
3/5
and 6/10
appreciate your comment, hope you like the next episodes better.
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